Major Planeswalker

Not to be a smart ass, but there are a few things that are not correct about your planeswalker. (I don't know where the character is from, so if I say something thats wrong please correct me)

1. A planeswalkers card always uses the characters name (first name or first name + last name), possibly followed by an added piece of text to describe him (like "Jace, the mind sculptor")

2. A planeswalkers sub-type also always contains his or her's name. (only first name)

3. always check if your wording is correct, punctuation is everything in the world of MtG

4. If you plan on playing this in a deck, make sure your opponent play's an evenly powered deck, because this is a bit too broken. (following MtG guidelines ofcourse)

other than that you seem yto have a fun idea in the making (or already made), good luck with it.